Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 2, 2019
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

I like how you've used bright colors and a dollar sign instead of the S, that was very clever.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could write some more about the car as I would love to have more information about it!
Great Job Cole!
Hi Cole, I like how you added the logo of the car and what it looks like.
ReplyDeleteYou taught me that a car costs more than 100,000 dollars.
Next time you could add more facts about the car.
What does the inside of this car look like?
it looks nice and it is Blake thank u
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