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Friday, August 2, 2019

persuasive writing

4 comments:

  1. I like how you've used bright colors and a dollar sign instead of the S, that was very clever.

    Maybe next time you could write some more about the car as I would love to have more information about it!

    Great Job Cole!

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  2. Hi Cole, I like how you added the logo of the car and what it looks like.
    You taught me that a car costs more than 100,000 dollars.
    Next time you could add more facts about the car.
    What does the inside of this car look like?

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    1. it looks nice and it is Blake thank u

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post